unconscious.
Obscure eyes lightened with the wonderful breath of life.
unconscious.
Pale eye lids holding her blue pride back from the light beyond them.
unconscious.
Heart tainted with genuine hope and pure love.
unconscious.
In the frail body that has served her so willingly, devotingly, loyally.
but now....
unconscious.
http://www.geokem.com/images/pix/G-OA-NGAUR-2.jpg
p.s. the picture of ngauruhoe at the top is about the same view you got when going up the rockgarden (and higher) chairlift! what a view!!!

2 comments:
cool!:) bravo!
thats great! if you were to edit i would make each verse (eg.Obscure eyes lightened with the wonderful breath of life.)
a little bit longer to help support the visual images!
excellent!
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