Her heart, a kaleidoscope of emotions which clash at every corner, on the verge of breaking free.
His soul, a deep dark hole, which will never be fully ventured, with merciless love, confusion and hatred common throughout the darkness.
It's mind, like a tsunami of thoughts, frustrated, never calm, always trying to break free of the limits strewn around it.
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3 comments:
veery good descriptions although its a different kind of poem...a kind without much rhthem. was that intentional? its very good.
yeah, i dunno, i didnt write it with rhythem but i guess i did in the sense of making words complement each other. mmmm...i guess that is just the structure oif the poem though.
that poem really made me think. it's good when poems do that, i think?
anyway I think it's a really cool poem and is really descriptive even though it was short. it also had an interesting flow/rhythm.
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